tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post4901198362413462014..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Beaver Flight Chapter 2Scott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-11439524306132172262014-11-09T13:56:02.480-05:002014-11-09T13:56:02.480-05:00Tori was a bit annoying to me, too. She should to...Tori was a bit annoying to me, too. She should tone down soon enough, with one more bit of fangirling coming up. Renee does; she's aware that there's nothing outside the base. Dominique turned into the bit of sanity the team meeded. Darcy, yeah, though I hope things will improve for her from your view in the coming chapters. I just needed to get the problem with the name out of the way, but it's not something that should return too often. Just get it over with for the readers.<br /><br />Yes, Victoria is responsible. Context appears next Friday. :)Scott Delahunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-55715549696610898132014-11-09T10:51:20.737-05:002014-11-09T10:51:20.737-05:00Characters are definitely getting filled out here....Characters are definitely getting filled out here. Tori is annoying, unless taken in small doses. Renee seems to have insecurities. Dominique seems the most practical and relatable for me personality-wise, which is interesting considering her stature is outside the norm (nice constant little references too, without hitting us over the head). The setting is also becoming more clear, through discussions and the stripes (which makes me think of Stargate). Oddly it's Darcy, the first one we saw, who's starting to feel less filled out, she's just the soldier in charge, though one gets the sense she is seeing the long term rather than one mission and done. I'm also glad we're not being hit over the head with the title.<br />I'm thinking Victoria is responsible for two of those "Next" quotes.Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com