tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post4226808814911804669..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Unruly - The New Girl Chapter 3 - CommentaryScott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-91244487833898698132015-03-16T17:44:26.303-04:002015-03-16T17:44:26.303-04:00Autumn has a very healthy sense of self that doesn...Autumn has a very healthy sense of self that doesn't live up to reality. She's the group's hacker, and does prefer online to offline, unless she can embarrass Caroline. Caitlin's plan also has the flaw of being what Verity wants her to do. Verity knows Caitlin as well as Caitlin knows Verity. The "Jennifers" thing will be shown next arc. For now, the first year students are background elements.Scott Delahunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-3563452626556741372015-03-16T08:47:46.464-04:002015-03-16T08:47:46.464-04:00Autumn does seem to have a chip on her shoulder, a...Autumn does seem to have a chip on her shoulder, and perhaps prefers to be online versus face-to-face. It seemed like a good time to explain backstory here, to give a clearer idea moving forward. Caitlin's plan seems to have HUGE flaws, like assuming whether Verity wants it or not, she can't simply roll with it... good that you add the question of their history to replace the one about the group's origins. Also that things didn't feel overloaded like the first part. I'm not sure about this "Jennifers"/junior student thing. Maybe it's the lack of discipline, given my teaching background. I'm wondering what classes are like. ^^Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com