tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post2813603533525257743..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Subject 13 #3 - CrushedScott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-90816547987007373602013-08-19T20:16:53.893-04:002013-08-19T20:16:53.893-04:00I may have lost details between the writing of #2 ...I may have lost details between the writing of #2 and #3, mainly because I was writing at work and couldn't flip back for the info. Rumour does help explain discrepancies, but there should only have been two, not three.<br /><br />The shoulder crunching I think was originally meant for the walled dude but, again, no time to check details when needed. The only problem with outing Nasty as an altie is explaining why they were waiting outside her apartment. If they admit that, Nasty could, if she wanted, press charges against them.<br /><br />It's early in the series - questions like these will come up. I wasn't expecting that the story would turn into what it is.Scott Delahunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-54994636201067607552013-08-19T10:22:06.027-04:002013-08-19T10:22:06.027-04:00Possible conflicts... in #2 students heard the inj...Possible conflicts... in #2 students heard the injury was from "a car". (Also, she doesn't wear her helmet when riding to school?) Now, admittedly, that could have been a rumour, not something ever stated by the football boys. Though why here were three of them injured? Did one of them fall on the way to the hospital? She only attacked two.<br /><br />Also one was sent into a wall (assuming that's the majorly injured guy), but the second had their shoulder crunched. How is that a "minor injury" that got him released? For that matter, if the football players didn't want Natasha around, wouldn't this be the perfect opportunity to get rid of her, by pegging her as the 'altie'? It also lets them save face because they weren't beaten up by a girl, it was by a powered person. (I suppose their desire to be seen as fighters of a cool villain could be bigger than their desire to get rid of Natasha.)<br /><br />I'm probably reading too much into something you wrote at work!Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com