tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post4759572486078935107..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Mecha Academy - Episode 1 - Chapter 7Scott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-4723148225720553862019-08-01T12:50:58.299-04:002019-08-01T12:50:58.299-04:00Couple of curiosities:
1) Dusty shrugged. "W...Couple of curiosities:<br />1) Dusty shrugged. "We talked. That's all."<br />"You're looking better," Lars said.<br />"So do you."<br />Rhiannon's face clouded with anger. "What does that mean?"<br /><br />...Rhiannon's getting upset over Lars and Dusty talking? Weird. <br /><br />2) "Where's Tyler?" Rhiannon demanded.<br />Ric twisted to see Rhiannon. "I don't know. Should I?"<br /><br />...the dialogue seemingly shifted for one of them but not the other.<br /><br />The use of communications was a good way to rope back in the world building off-world, as I mentioned in a prior comment, and the birthday was a good way to escalate the tensions after weeks having had passed. Though it seems a bit weird to do it right after de-escalating things, which would have been a good chance to branch elsewhere.<br /><br />Anything else I'll save for the commentary track, though I will mention that "Happy Birthday" as a title had me think Haag had invited Dusty over because it was her birthday.GregThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17689711881670288362noreply@blogger.com