tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post4438018528212956333..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Unruly - Basketball Night In Canada - Chapter 5Scott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-46202713261677159592015-06-30T17:55:25.153-04:002015-06-30T17:55:25.153-04:00First draft did, then I realized I needed Bree her...First draft did, then I realized I needed Bree here. I missed one mention. Skye, I should have caught, but I got so used to ignoring her name being flagged as misspelled, I completely missed it.Scott Delahunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-59175248743406907952015-06-30T16:26:47.217-04:002015-06-30T16:26:47.217-04:00"Caitlin gave Jennie a smile" - you mean..."Caitlin gave Jennie a smile" - you mean Bree here. (Guess a first draft had them talk to Jennie?) Um, and as long as I'm here, Skye became "Shye" at one point.Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com