tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post3934350874196086689..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Beaver Flight Commentary - Chapter 7Scott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-81918643642567960772015-02-15T22:51:23.467-05:002015-02-15T22:51:23.467-05:00I'm glad the "breeding" idea wasn...I'm glad the "breeding" idea wasn't just accepted, as Tori fired off some alternatives, with some good Darcy reactions. Tori's definitely becoming more likeable, even if she remains somewhat clueless in her human interactions. I'm also liking that she's getting scenes with Dom, there's a bit of a sisterly-like friendship forming there, in my opinion.<br /><br />The story is dragging a bit though, not sure if that's owing to the uncertain objective you mention. The characters themselves are admitting that they're just doing "busy work" that senior officials have already done, or are doing. Meaning the only reason to show US this, rather than do a time skip, is either for the purposes of world building (which we get a bit of in terms of tech and "Hawking-Cooper", but the appearance thing was already SEEN in the attack from part 4) or character development (and honestly the interactions feel like a retread of the previous part, but without the added subtleties like the Kangaroos wanting to change their name, since the conversation focus is on attacks... or boyfriends). I suppose if the intent is to show that 3 months of days like this would lead to losing your mind, there's something to that. But surely there's an earlier twist in store.Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com