tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post1627322694960234545..comments2021-05-16T13:41:12.015-04:00Comments on The Chaos Beast: Unruly - Basketball Night in Canada Chapter 4 - CommentaryScott Delahunthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-941010338872046982015-06-30T17:53:48.873-04:002015-06-30T17:53:48.873-04:00I am trying to keep my issues with the class separ...I am trying to keep my issues with the class separate from Laura's. :) The Laura/Mackenzie relationship has the potential to go the Romeo & Juliet path, including the body count, though they're being far more discreet and Mackenzie isn't coming off a rejection.<br /><br />I wonder if herding Jennifers could count as volunteer hours, keeping the young girls from becoming a nuisance in the community. If not, I'll have to figure something out. It'd have to be something where the trust issues the community has with the Unrulies doesn't come up too often.<br /><br />IIRC, private schools aren't subject to a school board, though I'd have to verify that. However, in Ottawa, I do know the main two private high schools (Ashbury and Elmdale) participate in the intra-school leagues. The meeting isn't a coincidence, and that, too, will be coming out later, though no timetable for that exists.<br /><br />Alas, for the cheesecake portion, I am not that great an artist. I have troubles enough with one character in a pic, let alone two. However, if there's a reader out there with artistic skills...?Scott Delahunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06735796666483741699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6464382918796251124.post-20338245132469544232015-06-30T15:57:24.133-04:002015-06-30T15:57:24.133-04:00Write what you know; I sense your frustration thro...Write what you know; I sense your frustration through Laura, even if the content differs. The Romeo issue is a genuine red flag too. Though something hilarious that occurs to me with your link to OSSD requirements: Students need 40 hours of (unpaid, logged) community involvement. While sometimes this can involve events taking place at school (volunteering time making sets for plays, or manning the table at blood drives), usually it's IN the community. I wonder how the Unrulies manage this?<br /><br />Returning back to the plot, wow, it's disconcerting when you think that the school board's against you, but the logic does follow. I'm also intrigued by the fact that a randomizer put the two key schools up against each other at the end (I was wondering when they'd meet) - that CANNOT be coincidence. And as a final aside... this part promised cheesecake. Where's the picture of Mackenzie falling into Laura's arms, as she bites her lip seductively? ;)Gregory Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547180132612659893noreply@blogger.com